Revelya
连载中In the marshes at the edge of the world, a lizardfolk boy keeps count of his days in the bark of a tree, and out on the Breach the mist has begun to breathe. On a river between two lords, a ferrywoman carries a girl across the water on the King’s word and learns what that word costs. On a prison rock off the city of Greymist, a branded sellsword with no name holds court every morning for a rook, and his mouth is about to cost him more than his face. And in a village called Greenest, a girl starts to dream.
Revelýa is an empire under a Hooded King, whose word travels with his riders and is kept by the Hush, who come on wings in the night when it is broken. Dark Signs is the first book.
My world, characters and plot, built from a 2015 manuscript and from an old D&D campaign of mine; prose drafted with an AI co-writer, snippets of my own writing and each line still hand-edited by me.
Chapter one is here as a draft for feedback; the following chapters are posted free on Royal Road: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/196975/dark-signs
第 1 本
Dark Signs在世界边缘的沼泽里，一个蜥蜴人男孩在树皮上刻痕，数着自己的日子；而在裂口（Breach）之外，迷雾已开始呼吸。在两位领主之间的河上，一名摆渡女子奉国王之命，载着一个女孩渡水过河，也由此明白了那道王命的代价。在格雷米斯特（Greymist）城外的囚岛上，一个烙了印、没有名字的佣兵每天清晨对着一只白嘴鸦开庭问案，而他这张嘴，将让他付出比毁掉一张脸更惨痛的代价。还有在一个名叫格林内斯特（Greenest）的村庄里，一个女孩开始做梦。
Revelýa 是一个由兜帽之王统治的帝国。他的诏令随骑手奔走四方，由"静默者"（the Hush）守护；一旦诏令被违背，他们便会在夜里振翅而来。
世界、角色与情节皆出自我本人，源自一份 2015 年的手稿和我早年的一场 D&D 战役；正文由我与 AI 联合撰写，其中穿插我自己的文字，每一行均经我亲手润色。
此处为第一章草稿；其余章节可在 Royal Road 免费阅读：https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/196975/dark-signs