அத்தியாயம் 12: IAW Vol 2 Ch 25 (Two Hands on Every Row)IAW தொ.2 அ.25 (ஒவ்வொரு வரியிலும் இரண்டு கைகள்)

இந்த அத்தியாயம் இன்னும் Tamil மொழியில் கிடைக்கவில்லை. உள்நுழைந்து மொழிபெயர்த்து அனைவருக்கும் கிடைக்கச் செய்யுங்கள்.

Corvin lasted until the second bell on Day 276 before he drew a box.

He had promised. He had stood at my counter the night before and said that he would explain it without boxes, the way he would have to explain it to Aldous, and he had started very bravely, with words. He got four sentences in. Then his ink-stained hand found a pencil, all by itself, and the pencil found a scrap of paper, and by the time he noticed what it was doing, there were two boxes on the scrap, joined by an arrow.

He looked at them with real betrayal.

"That one doesn't count," he said.

"It counts," I said. "I'm keeping it."

The first box said MAKES. The second said RELEASES.

"Two hands on every row," said Corvin. "One hand makes it: writes the row, takes the coin, signs as maker. A different hand releases it: counts that same coin again, out loud, in front of the customer, checks the passbook against the row, and only then stamps." He tapped the arrow. "Nobody makes and releases the same row. Not ever. Not for a bit."

I looked at the two boxes, and something very old and very tired in me sat up.

Maker. Releaser, I thought.

At home, we used the English words for it, even in Indonesian, because head office did. Every transaction above a certain size went into the system twice. One person entered it: the maker. Another person checked it and, if it was right, pressed a different button that let it go through: the releaser. I had been a maker for four years. I had spent a great deal of those four years waiting for a releaser, usually Mbak Rini, who was usually eating her lunch, while a customer drummed his fingers on my counter and looked at me as though the delay were a personal choice of mine.

I had resented every releaser I had ever had. Every single one.

I would give a great deal, I thought, to be kept waiting by Mbak Rini right now.

"Lotte wrote every row," said Corvin. "Lotte took every coin, or said she did. Lotte stamped every row. Lotte counted the vault and wrote the count. Wat stood beside her and couldn't read what she wrote. Every hand on those rows was hers." He tapped the second box hard. "If a second hand had had to count the coin for every deposit from down the road, out loud, and sign for it, there would have been nothing to count. She'd have had to make him lie as well."

"And if he lied as well?"

Corvin looked at me over his cracked lens, with something like approval.

"Then two hands agree to a lie," he said. "It happens. It's harder. Two people have to choose it, and keep choosing it, and trust each other every day not to tell. But it happens." He drew a third box, off to one side, not joined to the others by any arrow at all. "That's what this is for."

In the third box he wrote: COUNTS THE VAULT. TELLS NO ONE WHEN.

"Surprise counts," he said. "Not when the run comes in. Not on a day anyone could guess. And not by me, because from now on I'll be making rows every day, and the man who makes the rows can't be the man who counts the vault." He put the pencil down. "Someone who makes nothing and releases nothing in this house, day to day. Someone Aldous trusts more than he trusts either of us."

We both thought it at exactly the same moment. I saw it arrive in his face, which is not a face that hides things well.

"She'll say adequate," I said.

"She'll say adequate," Corvin agreed, "and she'll mean it to the bit."

Then I saw the thing I should have seen first, and my face did nothing, and inside I closed my eyes.

"Corvin."

"Yes."

"I write the rows. Every day. I write them, and I take the coin, and I stamp them."

"Yes," said Corvin. "You do."

The same rules, I thought. I said it to a baron. I said it to Brenna. Same rules for everyone in this house, or there are no rules in this house.

"So from today," I said, "I don't release anything I've made. Somebody else makes the row. I release it."

"No letter binds you," said Corvin. "Your stamp would take without it. Nobody could stop you."

"I know." I turned his scrap of paper round, so that the three boxes faced me. "That's why it has to be me who says it."

He took the scrap back, very carefully, and folded it, and put it in his satchel between Anselm's correction and the shipment record, and did not say anything for a while.

Then he cleared his throat.

"I'll need a stool," he said, "on your side of the counter."

You told me once, I thought, that if you wrote the rows, nobody would count you. Then I thought of the third box on his scrap, the one with no arrows going in or out of it. He had already thought of that. Of course he had.


A rule you have never tried to break is only a hope. Corvin said that. I wrote it down.

So on the evening of Day 283, after closing, with the door barred and the lamps lit, we tried to break it.

I played the crooked officer. Nobody else was willing, and it turned out that I was very well suited to it. For the first time in my life, my face was exactly what the job required.

Borrik played Gerrit Pask. He had volunteered before I finished asking. He had borrowed a battered folio from somewhere, and he had rounded his enormous shoulders in a way he seemed to think was small and humble, and he had developed, entirely on his own, a soft, polite voice that sounded like a bear trying to apologize through a door.

"Gentlemen," he announced, before we had even begun, "don't discuss terms."

"We haven't started, Mister Borrik."

"I'm getting into it," said Borrik.

Corvin sat on his new stool on my side of the counter, beside me, with the maker's pen in front of him. On the customers' bench sat our audience: Brenna, with a loaf, because she had heard there would be a performance; Fenn, with his slate, to keep score; Tamsin, with her crossbow, because Tamsin is always there. And at the end of the bench, very straight, with her hands folded, sat Mistress Hale.

Corvin had asked her at the gate two days before. She had said she would ask the master. She had come down the hill tonight without saying what the master had answered, and sat down, and nobody had dared to ask.

First attempt, I thought, and slid the ledger across to Corvin. "Make it, please, Mister Dalle. Gerrit Pask, for the holder: four crowns, twelve marks."

Corvin looked at the oak in front of Borrik. There was nothing on it.

"Make what?" said Corvin.

"The four crowns and twelve marks."

"Where are they?"

"In the vault," I said, with great confidence. "Already."

"Then go and fetch them," said Corvin, "and I'll count them."

I could not go and fetch them, because they did not exist. Fenn made a mark on his slate.

Second attempt. Borrik produced a cloth bag from inside his folio and laid it on the counter with a clink and a look of enormous cunning. Corvin untied it and counted, out loud, in front of everybody.

"One pebble. Two pebbles. Three pebbles—"

"They're river crowns," said Borrik, in his apologetic bear voice. "From the estate."

Brenna laughed so hard she dropped her loaf. Fenn made another mark.

Third attempt. I wrote another row, turned the ledger away from Corvin before he could see it, and signed his name in the maker's box myself, in my best imitation of his cramped, ink-stained hand. It was a very good imitation. I had been looking at that hand over my shoulder for most of a year.

Mistress Hale rose from the end of the bench, walked to the counter, looked at the box for exactly one second, and said, "That is not his hand."

"How can you tell?" I said. It was, honestly, a very good imitation.

"He makes his D like a man closing a door on someone," said Mistress Hale. "Yours is merely closing a door." She went back to the bench and sat down.

Corvin, beside me, looked as though he had been paid a compliment he did not know how to spend.

"And from now on," he said, "every maker's specimen hand goes on file, beside the customer's. So that anyone can tell. Not only Mistress Hale."

Fenn made a third mark.

Fourth attempt. I put my pen down. I turned on my stool to face Corvin, and folded my hands, and looked at him with my perfectly flat face.

"Mister Dalle," I said quietly. "His lordship's gentlemen are very pressing this season. There would be something in it for you. You need only make the row."

Corvin looked at me for a long moment. The hall was very quiet. Then he picked up the pen and wrote the row, with nothing at all on the oak, and signed it as maker in his own real hand.

"Done," he said.

Fenn's mouth fell open. Brenna stopped chewing. Borrik, forgetting that he was Gerrit Pask, said, "Corvin!" in his own voice, deeply wounded.

I pressed my stamp across the seam, and the gold ran, and the false row turned perfect and permanent and real, just as Lotte's had.

"There," said Corvin, into the silence. "Two hands, agreeing to a lie. It can always be done." He laid down the pen. "So, Mistress Hale. It's a quarter before dawn on some morning nobody has told us about. You come down the hill. What do you find?"

Mistress Hale did not move from the bench.

"I find," she said, "that the book says four crowns and twelve marks more than the shelves. Before either of you has had your breakfast." She paused. "And I go back up the hill and tell the master, and he does not need to read anything at all."

Nobody said anything.

Then Fenn, very slowly and carefully, rubbed out three of his marks on the slate, and left one.

"The house wins," he announced. "Three to one. But the one was really bad."

I wrote a correction under the false row that night, in the next line, and Corvin counted nothing for it, because there was nothing to count, and I stamped it. That row is still in our ledger. The rehearsal, and its correction, one above the other. Corvin wanted it there.

"So that nobody ever thinks it can't be done," he said.

Mistress Hale stood up, smoothed her skirts, and went to the door. At the door she stopped.

"The master," she said, without turning round, "said I was to tell you that I may come down the hill on any morning I choose, and that I am not to tell him which, either."

She went out. Tamsin, on the bench, said "Hm," which she has definitely learned from Rook.

It was the most hopeful thing anyone had said to me in a month.


The news came up the road the way news always comes up roads in Lorvane: in carters' mouths, a little bigger at every inn.

By the time it reached Corrinford, the Sekka had lost five hundred crowns in Aubrelle, the keeper had been arrested, the keeper had arrested someone else, and Borrik had personally fought a baron. Borrik did nothing to discourage the last part.

For most of a month, the count went up one and down one, like a tide. A tanner closed his account one morning, and an adventurer from Liesl's counter opened one the same afternoon. A cooper's widow drew out everything she had and wept at my window and said she was sorry, it wasn't me, it was only that she couldn't sleep; and the next day Hob Marrin brought in two of his bargemen, by the scruffs of their necks, and stood behind them while they opened accounts, glaring at anyone who looked as though they might hurry them.

Every night I wrote the same number at the bottom of my closing. Real: 199.

One, said the part of me that had sat at Counter 3 on the last afternoon of every quarter, with Pak Haris walking past and asking How many, Sekar? in his not-caring voice. One more. It's one. Anyone would do it. Find one.

The town, it turned out, had heard about the count, too.

On Day 290, Borrik came to my window with his passbook in one huge hand, and a second, blank passbook he had somehow obtained in the other, and an expression of tremendous cunning.

"Borrik the Second," he said.

I looked at him.

"I open another one," he explained patiently, "as Borrik the Second. Different heir. You get two hundred." He leaned closer, and lowered his voice to a rumble that carried to the back of the hall. "Nobody will know. I have a different hat."

Behind him in the queue, two of Hettie's girls nudged each other, and the older one said brightly that her cousin in the next village had a name she wasn't using, and they could bring it in on Restday, with a thumb.

The hall went quiet. Everyone was looking at me.

Pinjam KTP, I thought. In my own hall. Offered out of love.

"Mister Borrik," I said. "Thank you. No."

"But it's only one."

"I know," I said. "That's exactly why." I took the blank passbook out of his hand, very gently, and put it under the counter. "One name that isn't really a person is how all of this started. We're one short. We'll be one short honestly, until somebody real walks in."

Borrik thought about this for a long moment, his huge brow furrowed.

"Can I still wear the hat?" he said.

"You may wear the hat."

He wore it for three days. It was a very small hat, and nobody has ever told me where he got it.

And in the evenings, while the count went up and down like the tide, I wrote the seasonal report.

At home, a fraud above a certain sum had to be reported to the regulator within days, in writing, by the branch manager. Everyone was terrified of those reports. I had once watched a manager two branches over try to make one smaller, and then try to make it later, and then try not to make it at all. He did not work in banking any more.

So I wrote it the way we were taught, under the headings we were taught. I wrote them in Lorvane, but I thought them in Indonesian, because some things only feel properly true to me in the language I first learned to be afraid in.

What happened. The officer at Aubrelle and the steward of Baron Crane, between Day 185 and Day 220, wrote fourteen deposits of coin that was never paid into thirteen accounts opened in the names of debtors from Crane's land, and drew out fifty crowns and seven marks in real coin against them.

How much. Fifty-four crowns and twelve marks. All of it from the capital of the house. Not one bit from any depositor.

Why. Because one hand wrote, counted, stamped and reported every row at Aubrelle, and no other hand checked any of it for thirty-six days. Because the keeper of the house chose that officer, and set her limit, and read her rows every night looking for the good in them.

What we have done. One hand makes every row and another releases it, at both doors, the keeper's included. Every maker's hand on file. Surprise counts, at any hour, by someone who neither makes nor releases in this house. A question at the opening of every account: not only who are you, but what is this for. No one person may hold the leave of more than one other.

Who answers. The keeper.

I read it to Corvin on the night of Day 294, by the lamp, with the bar across the door. He listened to every word with his eyes closed. When I had finished, he held out his hand for my pen. I gave it to him. He clicked it four times and wrote one line at the bottom, under my name, in his cramped, ink-stained hand.

Every figure in this report is correct. C. Dalle.

I looked at the word for a long time.

I had heard it from Grane, at the town hall and again at my counter. I had heard it from Gerrit Pask, handing over his folio. Correct. I had begun to hate the sound of it. It had started to mean a lie with good arithmetic.

Under Corvin's hand, at the bottom of my report, it only meant what it said.

The report went down the road the next morning, on Day 295, with Hedda's run, sealed in red wax. The brass stamp was blank now, so there was nothing pressed into the wax at all. Beside it on the cart went thirty crowns of Corrinford coin for the Aubrelle shelves, counted by me, counted again by Corvin, and signed for by Hedda at the first end, with the second end left empty, waiting.


Since Day 284, the Corrinford vault had two locks as well. Jory's cousin the smith had fitted the second one, grumbling about the thickness of the old customs-house door, and Corvin held one key and I held the other, on a cord round my neck under my blazer, beside my lanyard. Neither of us could open it alone. Corvin had tested this personally, for most of an afternoon, in ways the smith had not considered.

On the morning of Day 305, I came in before dawn, as I always do, and found the lamp already lit.

Corvin was standing by the vault door with his key in his hand and his coat buttoned wrong. Beside him, very straight, in her black dress, with her hands folded and a small notebook of her own tucked under one arm, stood Mistress Hale.

She looked at me without any surprise at all.

"Good morning, Miss Halim," she said. "You were not supposed to know about this."

"I work here," I said.

"That," said Mistress Hale, "is precisely why."

"She came to my door at the last bell of the night," said Corvin. His voice was a little hoarse. "I don't know how she knew which door was mine. I didn't ask. I don't think I wanted to know."

"You hold the other key, Miss Halim," said Mistress Hale. "So you are supposed to know about it now."

I took the cord from round my neck. Corvin and I turned our two keys side by side, at the same moment, the way Lotte and Wat had been taught to, and the old iron door swung open on its hinges, and Mistress Hale went in with the lamp.

She counted everything. Every shelf, every bag, every loose crown in the strongbox, every mark and every bit. She counted out loud, in a voice that never went up or down, and wrote each shelf in her small upright hand in her own notebook as she went. Then she counted it all again from the beginning, because once, she said, is not a count. Corvin didn't help. He wasn't allowed to. He stood in the doorway with his hands behind his back, looking as though he had been made to stand in the corner and was trying very hard to enjoy it.

I stood beside him and waited.

At home, I thought, the night before a surprise audit, everyone knew. That was the joke. Somebody's cousin in head office always rang somebody's cousin in the branch, and we all stayed late and counted twice and hid the good biscuits. We called them surprise audits, and nobody was ever surprised.

This is what it's supposed to feel like, I thought. Like this. Cold, at dawn, with your coat on wrong.

When she had finished, Mistress Hale came out of the vault, and opened the ledger at my counter to yesterday's closing, and laid her notebook beside it, and ran one finger down both at once.

The hall was very quiet. Outside, the first carts were coming over the bridge.

"The book agrees with the shelves," said Mistress Hale. "To the bit."

She closed her notebook.

"Adequate," she said.

I had heard her say that word perhaps a dozen times since the day she stood beside our rate board and watched Lotte for an hour. I had never, until that moment, understood that it was the highest thing she had.

She went to the door. Corvin and I locked the vault behind her, our two keys turning at the same moment. At the door, she stopped, as she always seems to, with her back to us.

"The master," she said, "has asked me to tell you that he will see your house on the day before his forty days run out. In his study. Both of you." A pause. "He said that you are to bring the boxes."

She went out.

Corvin stood in the middle of the hall with his coat buttoned wrong and his mouth slightly open.

"He asked for the boxes," he said.

"He asked for the boxes," I agreed.

"I spent a month learning to explain it without them."

"I know."

He was quiet for a moment. Then he did something I had seen him do perhaps twice in a year. He laughed, out loud, all at once, like a man who has just found out that a debt he had been dreading was paid off long ago, while he wasn't looking.

That night, I wrote my closing.

Day 305. Real: 199. Surprise counts: 1. Short: nothing. Aldous's days: 9.

Under it, Corvin wrote nothing at all. He just sat at the counter beside me on his new stool, on my side of the oak, and ruled a fresh sheet of paper into boxes, very slowly, with enormous care, the way another man might sharpen a sword.

நீங்கள் விரும்பிய பகுதிகளை ஆர்ப்பரிக்க ஒரு பத்தியைத் தட்டவும்.

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